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The Moment I Fall by ~Durian:iconDurian:



(Sitting quietly at the back,
Of thoughts utter lack.)

Standing up, looking non stop,
Till the excitement is to much to crop.

I gaze into those deep blue pools,
two swords being used in duels

(Standing by the ledge.
Leaning over the edge.)

Tensioning as two waves collide,
concerns and doubts are all aside.

Sand is carried freely over the waves' surface.
While birds high above do a race.

(Putting one foot, then the other,
Slowly moving forth, no bother.)

The sea is no longer cool,
Drawing the ship into a whirlpool.

The waves lash out,
The sea being stout.

The water is reaching the mast,
It sinking into the sea at last.

(The sea grabs hold of me, drowning me,
I'm forever lost in the pools of the deep blue sea.)
©2004-2009 ~Durian
:icondurian:

Author's Comments

this hints to the relaton between kanditiaofthestars and me,
although not too well hidden, i've used a number of metafors, and so it should be clear..

maybe mature, but only if u think of it... heh

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:iconkanditiaofthestars:
its very dirty...lol *needs to clean out mind*

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So wake me when it's over, tell me when this feeling's gone, I'll always wait for you there, my favorite scar.

I like the way that you smile, I hate it when you cry, when we say goodbye.
:iconwhymebeacause:
nice

-Hal

--
I wish I had all the world to write, instead of just having all the world.
:iconfierydragoness:
*Is rather confused and lost* Im not sure what its about really.....but its rather interesting

--
:tombstone: :blackrose:
_~Fiery~_~Dragoness~_
:blackrose: :tombstone:

Believing isnt about seeing, Believing is about knowing :blackrose:

I am my own demise
maybe thats why I never really liked myself:tombstone:
:iconkanditiaofthestars:
I hope you feel this way about someone else :(

--
It's hard to notice gleaming from the sky when you're staring at the cracks. You wiped my tears, got rid of all my fears, why did you have to go? Guess it wasn't enough to take up some of my love. It's a strange, sad affair.
:iconkanditiaofthestars:
:hug: this just popped up on my random favorites and I have to say that I love it

--
I don't want to be lonely no more, I don't want to have to pay for this.

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